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  • Samantha Schmidt 10:36 pm on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Well Wishers (An Original Poem)

    Said the shriveled old man peering into the well,
    “I’m terribly sorry that you fell!
    This well is getting rather old;
    Crumbly rock and nasty mold…”

    To the shriveled old man peering down, I did shout,
    “Isn’t there some way to get me out?”

    He paused for a moment and said with a grin,
    “If you really don’t like it, then why’d you fall in?”

    I stood there dumbfounded, too shocked to reply.
    Would he leave me here to die?
    Trapped inside a moldy well,
    Shoulder-deep in cold, damp hell?

    “Though I’d help you, if I could,
    I haven’t ladder- rope nor wood!
    I guess I could go find a gun,
    but I’m too tired to look for one.”

    “A gun?!” I shouted with a start,
    “For what- to blow the well apart?”

    “No, no!” he chuckled wheezily,
    “So you can die more easily!
    I’ve no intent to be unkind,
    but I’ll leave now if you don’t mind.
    Me wife’s at home, the kettle’s on,
    I’ve sort of got to use the john.
    Sorry to leave you trapped down there,
    I’m just too old to really care.”

     
    • Samantha Schmidt 11:11 pm on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Wrote this my sophomore year of highschool, and still kind of like it. Would love suggestions/feedback! :)

  • Prof McGuire 8:40 pm on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

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  • Prof McGuire 8:24 pm on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Grade Book Updated

    Hi, all. Note that I’ve updated the grade book. Click “check my grade” to see how you are doing with respect to the grading contract. Let me know if anything looks amiss. I’ve been pretty “lenient” with respect to enforcing the terms of the grading contract; starting this week, I’ll be enforcing them fully. :-)

     
  • Lamine Sadoun 12:29 pm on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    xenophobe 

    i walk down the road that my fellow country men have paved
    its still fraught with danger rules for how to behave
    but its not so bad now, thanks to the brave

    But even though the path is well worn
    there is still advesity and immenant storm
    afterall it is not the American way to conform

    They say im out to get you and that i hate your way of life
    but isn’t your way of life hard work mixed with pleasure and strife
    i embrace you with open arm hand behind my back with flowers not knife

    when i yell its not because im angry, only to be heard
    is it so bad that i stand out from the herd?
    call me crazy but your accusations are absurd

     
  • Hope Wright 11:58 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    I hope everyone read first impressions… hurry if you forgot! lol

     
  • Nicole Bauer 1:24 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    This poem was really difficult to write. I’m not even sure if I met the requirements for it but I knew I had to at least try. I hope I did it correctly.

     
  • Nicole Bauer 1:21 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Wrong place wrong time 

    First year away at school
    Did exactly what you told yourself not to and feel in love like a fool

    For the first time in your life you actually feel alive
    You figure your ready to take this dive

    Having the time of your lives feeling as though there is no care in the world
    But of course a curve ball is what life hurled

    As you live life day by day as though nothing could go wrong
    Then bam a smack in the face now this life is like a bad country song

    (More …)

     
    • Hope Wright 11:51 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      I Like this poem…its real and you can feel the emotion in it as if you were the one that did the mistake…its a little wordy and repeatitive but it works for this poem… i say good job ; )

  • Kimberly Kwan 1:15 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    I had a hard time with this poem because I couldn’t think of anything. The whole explaination of what to write confused me itself. I had a brain fart for the enitre weekend, because I couldn’t think of anything else but “What should I write for my poem!? I’m not going to have anything!”. Now I hope I did it correctly… :/

     
  • Kimberly Kwan 1:07 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Game Over 

    Bang bang bang,
    Clutching tightly to a shiney pistol.
    Steady, aim, reloading another mag.
    Bang bang bang,
    Another three fall dead.

    Feeling the rush of adrenaline,
    As many more appear.
    You quickly pick each one off,
    And you do nothing but kill and stare.
    As the lifeless bodies of your enemies,
    Pile up at your feet.

    (More …)

     
    • Hope Wright 11:54 am on September 8, 2010 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      simple and straight to the point…very direct but attention getting especially at the begining… i like!

  • Hope Wright 9:49 pm on September 7, 2010 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Slow! Student Under Construction (Personal Political Poem) 

    Being an artist is bittersweet; balancing the clouds at our heads and the grounds at our feet.

    Raw art is to be made useful by at any cost but free and the success of college takes the job for a fee.

    I cling to my “art” that I have enrolled under construction, I let them borrow me on paper and pray for little distruction.

    College is the way to go if you want some career filled instruction but just hope you’ve done enough for these years; it’s all about production.

    Sometimes I wish the system wouldn’t compromise me because I love my art with or without a creditable degree.

    Oh institution is there a way to rebel against you in theory without failure of becoming poor, hungry, weary, and dreary.

    Depending on the location and the tax payers in the area you mean to tell me that’s how you base my performance and criteria.

    Why do you ask me to sacrifice all of me, when it’s not up to you but clearly the economy.

    It’s not that I don’t love you but your shady on some surfaces, I’ll give you a chance but I’ll need you to put some leeway on your scrimmages.

    Some things weren’t meant to be worked on in such vigorousness I hope you understand I’m not a chem. major just a little ole hard working startin’ out artist.

    My worst fears are you taking what was so purely raw and making it so statistically common, being force fed your institution and reproducing your vomit.

    I’m saying I’ll put in time and money for all your little projects, but just please don’t forget about me when my kids try and enter college.

     
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